First Line

Here’s the first line (first draft) from my new book.  I’m not sure about the title, but I’m calling the series Deus Ex Machina.  Please tell me if you like it.

Determined to follow the order to protect the machine monks, Red McLaren physically held the hysterical woman back as they watched his friend drenched with fire from a colossal dragon.

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